Learnt a lot from this story, highly appreciated work ,grat effort

Women Literature has a quality that every word seems to be dripped in femininity, same is the case with 'Chocolate'.
I loved how the two narratives were going together hand-in-hand, it kept me engaged all the time.
Moving towards the subject matter, the attitude of Saira's parents is so aptly represented, kudos to the writer who mustered up enough courage to highlight this social evil, where there is no godfather present for Saira and its just her and her injured self that has to survive.

Very well written

This story has touched a very sensitive issue of our modern day society and as a society we are in dire need of stories like these for the raising the awareness  in masses that it is more critical  issue than it apparently seems and how we can stop it by raising our voice at first place and listing to victim's voice. And for the story it's amazing that how well you have discussed this matter in such a short story.

Nice Theme

I just signed up to this site and finding my own teacher was really a surprise, i do not know, why mam did not discuss anything about her writings but fining one really pleased me. Indeed a great piece of work.

Loved the narrative. Good story. Amazing and courageous message.

Behtereen <3

Commendable story :)

Splendid!

This is amazing!

Please keep writing

I am simply amazed. I was not expecting.
Such a delicate and important topic, discussed well in such short words.
Just one word. Fabulous.