THE COMA - Short Story 4 Reviews

By: Ahmad Bilal Yousafzai

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Adam Peters narrates the delusional story himself as he recovers from the state of comatose. He finds himself locked in a sensation that he can only doubt the legitimacy of his reality. In this mess, he constantly tries to make sense of whatever his life has to offer.

ISBN (Digital) 978 969 696 249 6
ISBN (Hard copy) 978 969 696 591 6
Total Pages 30
Language English
Estimated Reading Time 1h
Genre Mystery
Published By Daastan
Published On 13 Sep 2021
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Ahmad Bilal Yousafzai

Ahmad Bilal Yousafzai

Ahmad Bilal is a Physics student who has a deep compassion for literary and storytelling. Started writing at a very young age, Ahmad has written a few compelling short stories and produced beautiful poetry which was published on Wattpad where they got over 3,000 reads.


Dec 16, 2018

In veil of mystery, the delusional anecdote of Adam Peter depicts his thrilling plus psychic life experience. Bolt from the blue ending and wonderfully executed plot makes it riveting. Ahmad wrote something worth reading. Really hoping for a prequel of this.

Anas Munir


Oct 08, 2018

Elements of a psycho thriller with the added garnish of being narrated by a delusional protagonist, all the while being shrouded by a veil of mystery. Everything is going perfect for Adam yet there is a big gaping hole in his consciousness. Ahmed Bilal executes the plot wonderfully well in limited time and develops the character so that the reader can sneak inside his head. The way he describes the overall environment and situation is the mark of a true author. It can only get better from here. For people with an attention span as limited as mine, this is a brilliant read. Really looking forward to the follow up to this.

Jul 24, 2018

Rida Noor


May 21, 2018

The plot leaves you curious and the amazing twist in the end leaves you utterly shocked. Very well plotted and written.

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