Adam Peters narrates the delusional story himself as he recovers from the state of comatose. He finds himself locked in a sensation that he can only doubt the legitimacy of his reality. In this mess, he constantly tries to make sense of whatever his life has to offer.
About THE COMA - Short Story
Quotes from THE COMA - Short Story
“The diary is my subconscious mind trying to talk to me and telling me to wake up from this illusion that I am trapped in.”
“This place is certainly not my own, I never wanted to paint the walls mustard colored.”
“Ahmad Bilal is enthusiast about conveying his feelings and daydreams through words and decrypting life's meaning through his poetry.”
Reviews (4)
In veil of mystery, the delusional anecdote of Adam Peter depicts his thrilling plus psychic life experience. Bolt from the blue ending and wonderfully executed plot makes it riveting. Ahmad wrote something worth reading. Really hoping for a prequel of this.
Elements of a psycho thriller with the added garnish of being narrated by a delusional protagonist, all the while being shrouded by a veil of mystery. Everything is going perfect for Adam yet there is a big gaping hole in his consciousness. Ahmed Bilal executes the plot wonderfully well in limited time and develops the character so that the reader can sneak inside his head. The way he describes the overall environment and situation is the mark of a true author. It can only get better from here. For people with an attention span as limited as mine, this is a brilliant read. Really looking forward to the follow up to this.
The plot leaves you curious and the amazing twist in the end leaves you utterly shocked. Very well plotted and written.
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