Waadi - e - Neela 16 Reviews

By: Afraz Jabeen

یہ کہانی ہے ایک ایسی سلطنت کی جہاں سکھ، محبت اور خوشیوں کا دوردورا تھا۔ ہر سو روشنی اور ہر چیز رنگین تھی۔ چرند پرند خوشیوں کے گیت گاتے تھے۔ رات کی تاریکی میں بھی اجالے کی کرنیں نظر آتی تھیں۔سکون کسی مدھر ساز کی طرح سلطنت کے ہر کونے میں بجتا تھا۔ ہر چیز پر کیف منظر ہر منظر دلفریب تھا۔ ایسی بےمثال سلطنت میں یک دم بونچھال آگیا۔ ایسی نظر لگی کہ جہاں محبت کی راگنی گنگنائی جاتی تھی، وہاں خوف و ہراس کےسائے منڈلانے لگے۔ ہرطرف پھیلی ہوئی چاندنی ایک ایسی مخلو ق کے تاریک سا ئے کے زد میں آگئی، جو انسانی اعضاء کی متلاشی تھی اورحاکمیت اس کا مشغلہ تھا۔ ہرخاص وعا م اپنے اوسان کھو بیٹھا۔ بے بسی بن برسات کی بارش کی طرح ہر طرف برسنے لگی۔ ایسے میں تباہی کے دہانے پر کھٹری سلطنت کو بچا نے کیلیئے جلال میدان میں اترا۔ مگر تمام راستے کانٹوں سے بھرے اور پہلیوں کی طرح الجھے ہوئے تھے۔

کیا جلال تمام الجھنوں کو سُلجھا پائے گا؟ کیا جلال کی بصیرت اُسےمحل کی خوشیاں واپس لانے کی راہ دکھائے گی؟ کیا وادئ نیلا کے راز منکشف ہو پائیں گے؟ کیا جلال ان نامعلوم راستوں پرچل کر کو ئی حل نکال پائے گا؟ یا پھر ویران راستوں کے بل کھاتےظاہری نشان اپنے اندر بہت سے اور رازوں کی طرح جلال کو بھی دفن کر لیں گے اور حاکم محکوم بن جائیں گے؟ 

ISBN (Digital) 000
ISBN (Hard copy) 978-969-696-180-2
Total Pages 50
Language Urdu
Estimated Reading Time 1 hour
Genre Mystery
Published By Daastan
Published On 04 Sep 2018
Afraz Jabeen

Afraz Jabeen

A lecturer by profession and writer by passion. https://www.facebook.com/jabeenafraz/

Reviews


Sep 10, 2018

very good

Mar 17, 2018

I really like this story. The most appropriate review for this story is to say "well-written" story.

Mar 12, 2018

You fantasized wonderfully and grabbed the attention of the readers so nicely that it cannot be expressed in mere words.
Writing in Urdu though being an English Literature Lecturer, is definitely not a lay man's capabilty
Wonderful job, looking forward for more!

Aftab Saqib

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Feb 06, 2018

Congrates on your work, its really awesome,
The story took me, to the time when i loved kids and fantasay stories, (i still do) mazhar kaleem.sahab or zaheer ahmed ki yaad taza kardi,
Kahani main thrill or suspence kafi acha hay, magar aik baat jo mainay mehsus ki wo ye k mussanifa likhnay main chand maqamat par jald bazi kar gae hen,
But overall its a great work.

Feb 02, 2018

You actually took me to the childhood literature magazines. Very nostalgic, yet creative. You put life into a dead land. I would wait for more stories like that.

Jan 28, 2018

Very awesome book really amazing and want to meet the writer stay blessed

btr memoon

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Jan 27, 2018

Jan 26, 2018

I am always inspired of those writers who are in major English literature field but they write in urdu so well too. This writer is an example.

Fantasy genre with naga like creature, fairies and dwarfs are well used in the story. Wish the writer good luck and looking forward to her more works in future.

Sidra Ali

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Jan 25, 2018

I tried my best to understand it because it was beyond my expectations. It was compelling me to dissolve my all the senses into it.. kind of a Magic i read. Gradually The fragile cords of my mind became the strengthen knots .I really Enjoyed it. It was entirely a justice to the respective Genre. This is really a priviledge to have these kind of authors with us who enlighten other's inner abilities and through this they come up with their compassions.

Sidra Ali

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Jan 25, 2018

I tried my best to understand it because it was beyond my expectations. It was compelling me to dissolve my all the senses into it.. kind of a Magic i read. Gradually The fragile cords of my mind became the strengthen knots .I really Enjoyed it. It was entirely a justice to the respective Genre. This is really a priviledge to have these kind of authors with us who enlighten other's inner abilities and through this they come up with their compassions.

Sidra Ali

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Jan 25, 2018

I tried my best to understand it because it was beyond my expectations. It was compelling me to dissolve my all the senses into it.. kind of a Magic i read. Gradually The fragile cords of my mind became the strengthen knots .I really Enjoyed it. It was entirely a justice to the respective Genre. This is really a priviledge to have these kind of authors with us who enlighten other's inner abilities and through this they come up with their compassions.

Jan 25, 2018

Parallel plots are running in the story which are full of suspense. Story is worth entertaining and imaginative. Two worlds of humans and fairies have been beautifully described.

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